Hi, I'm going to ask that you go over your personality section again.

Vriska is a complex character, in that she has a lot of things that she shows outwardly, that are quite different from how she feels (for example saying that she's amazing and seemingly having no conscience while in fact desperately needing validation from others and feeling a little bad about the things she's done). In the personality section you've written, it's quite unclear in places which bits are just her projected personality, and which are what she really believes. It makes it seem as though Vriska has all the personality traits at once, rather than pretending to have some while actually being something else, so if you could please rewrite it to be more clear about what you feel is really going on in Vriska's head, compared to what she projects outwardly, it would be very helpful.

Also, please provide me with a second sample, either another link or a written sample. Thanks!